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A CRUX IN JUVENAL (6.195)

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  04 June 2025

G. Zago*
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Università di Firenze
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This article deals with a well-known crux in Juvenal (6.195). Previous conjectures are discussed before a new emendation is proposed.

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Hoc sermone pauent, hoc iram, gaudia, curas,
hoc cuncta effundunt animi secreta. quid ultra?
concumbunt Graece. dones tamen ista puellis,
tune etiam, quam sextus et octogensimus annus
pulsat, adhuc Graece? non est hic sermo pudicus
in uetula. quotiens lasciuum interuenit illud
ζωὴ καὶ ψυχή, modo sub lodice relictis
uteris in turba. quod enim non excitet inguen
uox blanda et nequam? digitos habet. ut tamen omnes
subsidant pinnae, dicas haec mollius Haemo
quamquam et Carpophoro, facies tua conputat annos. (Iuv. 6.189–99)

Juvenal mocks women, especially older women, who think that speaking Greek makes them more attractive; therefore, they use Greek terms of endearment. I have given the text according to Clausen’s OCT of Persius and Juvenal.Footnote 1 At line 195 the reading relictis, transmitted by the manuscripts, is barely tolerable. If, as most scholars do,Footnote 2 we interpret modo sub lodice relictis to mean ‘things lately left beneath the blanket’, the phrase modo … in turba is nonsensical, because, as Housman saw, saying ‘you use in public things lately left beneath the blanket’ is no more logical than saying ‘you play on the playground with the ball lately left at home’.Footnote 3 Housman proposed ferendis (‘you use in public things [sc. words] that are only endurable beneath the blanket’), a conjecture that he regarded as certainFootnote 4 and placed in the text. With this conjecture modo means ‘only’, not ‘lately’, and the uetula, who is about to turn eighty-six, ‘propterea inducitur quia iam nec Graece concumbit nec Latine, ut eius in ore impudica uideantur uocabula quae puellis ueneri habilibus forsitan condonari possint’.Footnote 5 Housman compared Mart. 10.68.5–8 κύριέ μου, μέλι μου, ψυχή μου congeris usque, | pro pudor! Hersiliae ciuis et Egeriae. | lectulus has uoces, nec lectulus audiat omnis, | sed quem lasciuo strauit amica uiro.Footnote 6

Three objections may be levelled at Housman’s conjecture:

  1. 1. As pointed out by Watt and Delz,Footnote 7 if we set 6.195 aside, modo means nuper in seventeen of the other eighteen passages in which it occurs in Juvenal; Juvenal’s only instance of this word in the sense of solum is at 2.135 liceat modo uiuere, in which modo is postpositive, as is normal in Latin when it is used as an exclusive particle.Footnote 8

  2. 2. Despite the ingenuity displayed by Housman in his attempt to explain the alleged corruption of ferendis to relictis (ferendis turns into ferelictis, because n is taken for li and d for ct; ferelictis is then miscorrected to relictis), his palaeographical justification is unconvincing. As Watt rightly remarked,Footnote 9 a more plausible emendation of relictis would be not a gerundive but another perfect participle.

  3. 3. If we accept ferendis, Juvenal’s text sounds strangely indulgent towards the lascivious habit of using Greek for erotic endearments,Footnote 10 a habit that was associated with prostitutes (cf. Mart. 10.68). True, at line 191 Juvenal writes dones … ista puellis (‘you may allow such things in young girls’, that is, ‘one might perhaps forgive the fact that young girls use Greek on every occasion, concubitus included’), but the premise from which he starts is that Hellenomaniac matronae are unbearable and nauseating, regardless of their age (184–7 quaedam parua quidem, sed non toleranda maritis. | nam quid rancidius quam quod se non putat ulla | formosam nisi quae de Tusca Graecula facta est, | de Sulmonensi mera Cecropis?). It is therefore clear, in my opinion, that, when Juvenal says dones … ista puellis,Footnote 11 he is not making any concession to a habit he considers intolerable but is merely employing a rhetorical trick to emphasize that elderly women who affect titillating Grecisms are more insufferable than young girls who behave in the same way. The context gives no hint that Juvenal regarded Greek terms of endearment as ‘things which are tolerable under the blanket’ (sub lodice ferenda).

The same three objections may be raised to Nisbet’s loquendis (‘you use in public expressions that should be spoken only under the blanket’),Footnote 12 the second and the third to Watt’s pudendis (‘you use in public words which but lately were considered shameful in private’),Footnote 13 the first and the third to Delz’s receptis (‘you use in public words which are only admissible under the blanket’).Footnote 14

These unsuccessful attempts at emendation were all based on Housman’s assumption that modo sub lodice relictis | uteris in turba can only mean ‘you use in public things lately left beneath the blanket’. However, another, more promising, interpretation seems possible: ‘you use in public things that you have lately stopped employing beneath the blanket’, that is, ‘you use in public Greek terms of endearment that you have recently ceased to employ in the bedroom’.Footnote 15 The next two sentences (196–9 quod enimconputat annos) would explain why the uetula has stopped using Greek locutions such as ζωὴ καὶ ψυχή under the covers: she is too old and no longer has sexual partners to talk to there. With relictis thus interpreted, the passage has nearly the sense that, according to Housman, is required by the context; one detail, however, is incongruous. If the uetula who is about to turn eighty-six has stopped using Greek endearments sub lodice because of old age, she should have done so not ‘lately’ (modo) but a long time ago. An ironic use of modo, which in other contexts cannot be ruled out,Footnote 16 in this passage would be as inappropriate as an ironic use of ‘recently’ in a sentence such as ‘you, a sixty-year-old lady, have recently finished high school and use teenage slang’. Of course, there could be an ironic aspect in saying that only ‘recently’ the uetula has achieved the understanding that titillating Grecisms are not appropriate sub lodice. But this explanation of modo sub lodice relictis would create more difficulties than it would solve: with the transmitted text so interpreted, the behaviour of the uetula would in fact be inconsistent (an old woman who has realized that Greek endearments are inappropriate under the blanket should a fortiori perceive that they are even less appropriate when used in public), and such inconsistency would not make satirical sense in Juvenal’s context; on the contrary, it would weaken the force of the vituperation, because Juvenal would be implicitly saying that the silly uetula has ‘recently’ come to her senses, albeit partially. Emendation is therefore necessary. Leo, who understood the passage as meaning ‘uetula Graece loquens amatoria inserit ut alliciat uiros, deserta scilicet’, proposed the substitution of mihi for modo.Footnote 17 The conjecture is palaeographically neat (mi, the ancient nota for mihi, can easily turn into mo, the ancient nota for modo),Footnote 18 but it is also far from felicitous: as a ‘datiuus ethicus’, mihi would be an otiose filler whether in the main clause (interuenit illud | ζωὴ καὶ ψυχή, mihi sub lodice …) or in the relative clause (interuenit illud | ζωὴ καὶ ψυχή mihi, sub lodice …); moreover, in both cases the ordo uerborum would be anomalous, because the ‘datiuus ethicus’ normally occurs in second position in its clause.Footnote 19 If taken with the main clause and construed with relictis as a dative of agent or of person benefited, mihi would be absurd. If it were a ‘datiuus termini’ governed by interuenit, it would be inept: interuenit … mihi would then have to mean mihi superuenit ex improuiso (‘whenever that naughty ζωὴ καὶ ψυχή unexpectedly reaches my ear, you are using in public words that you have ceased to employ in the bedroom’);Footnote 20 but to emphasize that the uetula often uses lascivious Greek words when the poet is around would be irrelevant and even misleading in this context, since for the poet, evidently, the indecent behaviour of the old woman is objectionable in general, regardless of whether her lustful words reach his ear.Footnote 21 Note also that from a metrical point of view a syntactical break after mihi would be abnormal, since in the Latin hexameter a diaeresis after the third foot very rarely coincides with a pause in the sense.Footnote 22

Other conjectures hardly deserve mention: the deletion of lines 195–6 quod enim … nequam by GuyetFootnote 23 and the deletion of lines 195–8 modo … pinnae by KnocheFootnote 24 clumsily amputate the text and destroy its intertextual connection with Mart. 6.23.Footnote 25 Even less attractive is the violent alteration of the paradosis proposed by Heinrich (toties lasciuum interseris for the transmitted quotiens lasciuum interuenit at line 194; deletion of lines 193–4 Graece … uetula and of lines 195–6 modo … turba).Footnote 26 The attempt at emendation by Francken (quotiens lasciuum interuenit illud | ζωὴ καὶ ψυχή, modo sub lodice relicta | u<er>teris in turba) is grotesquely contrary to the required sense.Footnote 27

The best conjecture suggested so far is another proposal by Delz, peractis (‘“du gebrauchst in der Öffentlichkeit Ausdrücke, die du kürzlich noch unter der Decke beim concubitus verwendet hast”. Handlung und begleitende Äusserungen wären in peractis ebenso verkürzend zusammengefasst wie in concumbunt Graece’).Footnote 28 Delz observes that, pace Housman, Juvenal’s passage is probably intended to deride not elderly women who no longer have a sexual life but uetulae who are (or seek to be) sexually active, such as those evoked at Juv. 1.37–41, who make gigolos rich.Footnote 29 I think that Delz’s suggestion is on the right lines, but I am not convinced by peractis, which, with all due respect to Delz, cannot mean ‘Ausdrücke, die du … verwendet hast’, but rather (contra mentem poetae) ‘actions you have performed’. I suggest relatis (‘uttered’),Footnote 30 which fits the context better (cf. 198 dicas haec mollius …) and is palaeographically closer to the transmitted reading (for the very easy corruption of relatis to relictis cf. Manil. 5.1 relatis LM : relictis G). I would also put a colon after uetula (194), because quotiens … turba (194–6), in my opinion, explains non est hic sermo pudicus | in uetula (193–4). In summary, I think that we should read and punctuate lines 193–6 as follows:

non est hic sermo pudicus
in uetula: quotiens lasciuum interuenit illud
ζωὴ καὶ ψυχή, modo sub lodice relatis
uteris in turba.

This language is shameless and disgustingFootnote 31 in an old woman: whenever that naughty ζωὴ καὶ ψυχή pops out, you are using in public words that you have lately uttered under the blanket.

The sense of lines 193–9 thus restored is that Greek endearments are shameless and disgusting when they come from a uetula, because they reveal her repulsive appetite for sex; in fact, when she uses lascivious expressions such as ζωὴ καὶ ψυχή in public, one senses that she is lustful and has lately uttered them in the bedroom to arouse her partner, because (196 enim) alluring Greek words are a powerful tool of seduction;Footnote 32 however (197 tamen), she is too old and ugly, so, to her disappointment, they are ineffective both sub lodice and in turba, where she employs Greek sweet words when looking for new partners. Left unsaid is that, like other old women in Latin invective,Footnote 33 she can only pay for sex.

Footnotes

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M.D. Reeve kindly read the first draft of this article and made numerous suggestions for which I am most grateful. I also thank Bruce Gibson and the anonymous readers for their valuable comments.

References

1 W.V. Clausen (ed.), A. Persi Flacci et D. Iuni Iuuenalis Saturae (Oxford, 1959 [19922]).

2 See most recently two Italian translations, B. Santorelli (ed.), Giovenale: Satire (Milan, 2011), 79: ‘usi in pubblico parole appena lasciate sotto le lenzuola’, and G. Dimatteo (ed.), Giovenale: Satire (Santarcangelo di Romagna, 2023), 117: ‘usi, in mezzo alla gente, parole appena lasciate sotto le lenzuola.’ See also the still valuable commentary by L. Friedländer (ed.), D. Junii Juvenalis Saturarum libri V (Berlin, 1895), 305–6: ‘so oft solche griechische Ausdrücke in deiner Rede vorkommen, brauchst du Worte, die du vor Kurzem (beim Aufstehen von einer Schäferstunde) unter der Bettdecke (wo allein sie zulässig sind) zurückgelassen hast, unter Leuten.’

3 Cf. A.E. Housman (ed.), D. Iunii Iuuenalis Saturae (London, 1905 [19312]), 43, who remarks that ‘uerba lasciua, quibus quis in turba utitur, ea sub lodice relicta non sunt, sed in medium elata.’

4 Housman (n. 3), xxx.

5 Housman (n. 3), 43.

6 Housman’s diagnosis is approved by E. Courtney, A Commentary on the Satires of Juvenal (London, 1980 [Berkeley, 20132]), note ad loc. (‘relictis is clearly corrupt, as Housman saw. Lascivious words used in turba are not “left under the blanket”; they are inexcusably impudica because they come from an octogenarian who is past intercourse either in Greek or Latin; and enim 196 is senseless as the text stands. Ferendis does not carry full conviction but is certainly on the right lines. Modo will now mean “only”, not “lately”’). Housman’s conjecture is accepted by Lorenz in his recent Tusculum edition of Juvenal (S. Lorenz [ed.], Juvenal: Satiren/Saturae [Berlin and Boston, 2017]).

7 Cf. W.S. Watt, ‘Notes on Juvenal’, Eikasmos 7 (1996), 283–9, at 284–5; J. Delz, ‘Bemerkungen zu Juvenal’, MH 55 (1998), 120–7, at 123–4.

8 Cf. TLL 8.1298.3–4 s.v. modus; H. Pinkster, The Oxford Latin Syntax: Volume 2: The Complex Sentence and Discourse (Oxford, 2021), 875.

9 Cf. W.S. Watt, ‘Notes on Juvenal’, Hermes 130 (2002), 299–305, at 300.

10 The point is made by F. Bellandi (ed.), Giovenale: Contro le donne (Satira VI) (Venice, 1995), who in his note ad loc. (133) observes: ‘Housman propose ferendis (che introdurrebbe opportunamente il tipico tema giovenaliano dell’“intollerabilità” del vizio, cf. 184), ma in questo caso, dando a modo il senso di tantum (“soltanto”), si avrebbe un satirico stranamente indulgente con questi costumi lussuriosi che ammetterebbe, sia pure a denti stretti, per l’intimità.’

11 In the light of line 184 (maritis), here puellis can only mean ‘young brides’ (cf. TLL 10.2.2508.50–69 s.v. puella). It is unclear whether the person addressed in dones (191) is the uetula or Postumus (the addressee of the sixth satire) or the reader. The resolution of this issue would be irrelevant for our purposes.

12 R.G.M. Nisbet, ‘Notes on the text and interpretation of Juvenal’, in N.M. Horsfall (ed.), Vir bonus discendi peritus: Essays in Honour of Otto Skutsch (London, 1988), 86–110, at 96–7 (= R.G.M. Nisbet, Collected Papers on Latin Literature [Oxford, 1995], 227–60, at 241–2, 433–4). Nisbet prefers his own loquendis to Housman’s ferendis because ‘as loquendis suggests words more specifically than Housman’s ferendis … it combines more easily with uteris (uerbis uti is a common locution)’. loquendis was placed in the text by Willis in his Teubner edition of Juvenal (J. Willis [ed.], D. Iunii Iuuenalis Saturae sedecim [Stuttgart and Leipzig, 1997]) and by Morton Braund in her Loeb of Juvenal and Persius (S. Morton Braund [ed.], Juvenal and Persius [Cambridge, MA and London, 2004]); it is also accepted by L. Watson and P. Watson (edd.), Juvenal: Satire 6 (Cambridge, 2014), 64 and 136.

13 Watt (n. 7), 284–5. Both pudendis and Nisbet’s loquendis are more radical alterations of the transmitted relictis than Housman’s ferendis.

14 Delz apud Watt (n. 9), 300.

15 relictis would have here the same sense as in the lemma of Gell. NA 11.7 uerbis antiquissimis relictisque iam et desitis minime utendum. Cf. TLL 11.2.950.44–68 s.v. relinquo.

16 See, for instance, the ironic sense of tam cito in Mart. 9.29.1–2 saecula Nestoreae permensa, Philaeni, senectae | rapta es ad infernas tam cito Ditis aquas?

17 O. Jahn, F. Bücheler and F. Leo (edd.), A. Persii Flacci, D. Iunii Iuuenalis, Sulpiciae Saturae (Berlin, 19104), 135. Leo’s conjecture was derided, but not refuted with philological arguments, by Housman (n. 3) in the Preface to his second edition of Juvenal (xlvii).

18 See W.M. Lindsay, Notae Latinae (Cambridge, 1915), 123, 129.

19 Cf. H. Pinkster, The Oxford Latin Syntax: Volume 1: The Simple Clause (Oxford, 2015), 931–2.

20 Cf. TLL 7.1.2299.73–2300.44 s.v. interuenio. In the transmitted text (or with mihi used as a ‘datiuus ethicus’) interuenit necessarily means ‘pops up’: cf. TLL 7.1.2298.40–5; OLD s.v. 4.

21 Leo (n. 17) does not clarify what syntactic function he assigns to mihi.

22 See S.E. Winbolt, Latin Hexameter Verse: An Aid to Composition (London, 1903), 37–40; H. Drexler, ‘Hexameterstudien V’, Emerita 21 (1953), 163–76, at 164–5; H. Drexler, Einführung in die römische Metrik (Darmstadt, 1967), 105; H.H. Huxley, ‘Significant diaeresis in Vergil and other hexameter poets’, Vergilius 33 (1987), 23–8, at 25–6. In Juvenal’s sixth satire the third foot ends with a pyrrhic word twenty-nine times (7; 29; 51; 77; 80; 110; 132; 138; 187; 211; 213; 237; 238; 284; 338; 339; O 16; 413; 423; 432; 445; 454; 460; 524; 581; 614; 646; 648; 655; some of these lines have been suspected, more or less justifiably, of being spurious; see the apparatus of Willis [n. 12]), but only in line 77 (aut Glaphyrus fiat pater Ambrosiusque choraules) does a strong pause at the diaeresis before the fourth foot split the hexameter in the middle; an equally exceptional line from the second satire (110 hic nullus uerbis pudor aut reuerentia mensae) is cited by Huxley (this note).

23 J. Willis, ‘The conjectures of Guyet in the text of Juvenal’, Antichthon 30 (1996), 49–57, at 51; see also Willis (n. 12), 67.

24 U. Knoche (ed.), D. Iunius Iuuenalis: Saturae (Munich, 1950), 46.

25 stare iubes semper nostrum tibi, Lesbia, penem: | crede mihi, non est mentula quod digitus. | tu licet et manibus blandis et uocibus instes, | te contra facies imperiosa tua est (in Martial’s context digitus does not have the same function as digitos in Juvenal’s; none the less, the occurrence of the noun in both passages is significant per se and strengthens the hypothesis of an intertextual connection between them). Other epigrams by Martial that have similarities with our passage are 11.29, to which we will return, and 12.97, in addition to the aforementioned 10.68. For the wide influence of Martial on Juvenal, see especially R.E. Colton, Juvenal’s Use of Martial’s Epigrams. A Study of Literary Influence (Amsterdam, 1991).

26 C.F. Heinrich (ed.), D. Iunii Iuuenalis Satirae, 2 vols. (Bonn, 1839), 2.238.

27 C.M. Francken, ‘Ad Iuuenalem’, Mnemosyne 21 (1893), 202–10, at 204–5. He explains it as follows: ‘uetula, frustra conata sub lodice explere lubidinem, sub noctem (tanquam Iulia ista minor) in publicum egreditur, ubi in turba blanda uerba susurrat ad amatorem capiendum. Non alia tam impudens est: quotiens in turba constipata, ubi distingui non potest, prohibente etiam crepusculo, unde uox ueniat, blanda illa uerba audimus, te uerti in uicinia scimus’. It is clear, however, that Juvenal is not conjuring up a scenario in which those who heard the expression ζωὴ καὶ ψυχή can only speculate on the identity and age of the woman who uttered it, but he is describing a situation in which the uetula, who is about to turn eighty-six, uses lascivious Greek words in full view.

28 Delz (n. 7), 123–4.

29 Delz (n. 7), 124 compares Hor. Epod. 8 and Mart. 11.29; see also Priap. 12 and 57. On the stock character of the libidinous uetula in ancient literature, see L.C. Watson, A Commentary on Horace’s Epodes (Oxford, 2003), 288–93.

30 On refero in the sense of ‘utter’, ‘render (a sound)’, cf. Verg. Aen. 5.409 tum senior talis referebat pectore uoces; Val. Fl. 6.496 (Hecate) has imo referebat pectore uoces (in Juvenal’s passage in line 197 we find uox); Val. Max 8.7 ext.1 Demosthenes … cum inter initia iuuentae artis, quam adfectabat, primam litteram dicere non posset, oris sui uitium tanto studio expugnauit, ut ea a nullo expressius referretur and the passages listed in TLL 11.2.628.25–36; see also OLD s.v. refero 13d.

31 Both ‘shameless’ and ‘disgusting’ are possible meanings of non pudicus (= impudicus; cf. OLD s.v. impudicus, 1–3), which at line 193 seem to coalesce.

32 One of the anonymous readers points out that Juvenal’s idea that sexy language digitos habet possibly owes something to Pers. 1.19–21, which itself may be drawing on Catull. 16.9–11.

33 Cf. 1.37–41; Priap. 57; Mart. 11.29.